Parabureau from Talapur, Punjab , India
I couldn't get into it. By the forth or fifth chapter i should be hooked and i wasn't. The idea of a griffin mage was interesting, but Kes seems to be too flat a character. We know what she's going to do so its hard to cheer for her. I almost wish big gun would just tell me how it ends so i don't have to keep slogging through it. Exceptional idea, but for a "page turner" it lacks in shift.